Monday, February 20, 2006

assorted haiku

constant waiting game
advancement but nothing moves
what will spell enough

a flawed plan
doomed from the outset
man

pitter patter windshield
so rain falls
making tiny splashes

the cold
blankets the world in frost
chilling breath

growing black abyss
a shallow pool in your eyes
the sun shines no more

2 Comments:

Blogger Isaiah DeRose said...

wait i dont understand

explain to me why some of these arent in 5-7-5 format

6:32 PM  
Blogger Justin said...

Some of these are nine-word haiku.

8:28 PM  

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